Dandelion Poem by Unwritten Soul

Dandelion

Rating: 4.3


Wind hush is the sky breath
It spreads cotton wings
White and light
And it's you try to fly
Away from this ground
A field of dandelions

You traveling by the air
With the emotions there
A will to find a strength
Before grow as a new dandelion
I know u always be the brave one
Time to discover earth in your lifetime
Be brave just like other dandelion

Great to know you will be fine
Because i hope you always fine
Forbidden line is not exist
You free across the mist
No boundary for you, dandelion
Flying freely and never be afraid
The choice you take
It's not wrong to be brave
I know one day you will find a place
Somewhere for you growing strong and flowering grace
Perhaps we don't know where but you deserve something
Like dancing in the air you will cheer with happiness
There's still a long journey
Before a seed to find a site
A basement to grow
Taller and restart great life,
Bear everything all bright

Just like other dandelions
Traveling surround you is mystery
Nobody wanted to invite hurt
In the journey if it comes
Forget not poison comes with remedy
O Friend make easy stand
Close friend will never end
Understanding is the sand
For you dandelion growing strength
White wings make beautiful land
It's been a while but i know
One day you will travel far from here

In the air we'll always keep in touch
Not much what you asked as it is a must
Because my friend, you aren't like a dust
Blown to somewhere then settled in quietness
To left and ignored after the passing past
Sometimes hello don't need a bye
But now you must fly and chase your dream
As friend always be there and understand
Without hands to hold or eyes to see
and i am glad u know i always there
and i always be there

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
: : : : : : : : : Theme; Courage in dream: : : : : : : : :
Originally written for a friend, it was long time not read
but it's time for me to share with all...As i know our life
sometimes like a dandelion we have will to fly/got to leave,
Finding the best ground to restart life with more passion.
Life could be hard but i think we can learn from the dandelions
never give up, as we keep fly with small wings before
find a land we desired...a dream will come true but
time will tell when...
If you have a dream, be brave to land the dream :)

This not using friendship as the main theme (even it was included) but it more on a wish of a dream to land a future..
wherever you are life is always created for you, everyone deserves it
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 13 May 2012

There's still a long journey Before a seed to find a site A basement to grow Taller and restart great life, Bear everything all bright How much my soul loves those words! ! I can feel my whole being as such flower, my body to earth tied, my spirit yet to fly like a dandelion clock to spread its love! Inspiring, great write.Thank you!

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Captain Cur 24 June 2012

Whenever I am down in the dredges and need a kind hand to pull me out of the hold of despair, I turn to one of your magical poems and my spirit soars again. Beautiful write.

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Walterrean Salley 13 August 2012

Very delightful. Gives hope and inspiration to all.

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Richard Jarboe 02 July 2016

Dandelions are taproots. Taproot motto: You can rip us up, but you can't get rid of us. Good work

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Unwritten Soul 03 July 2016

Wonderful taproot motto ric! ! Be strong be strong its not wrong :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2018

There's still a long journey. With happiness we do this. Life is better perceived due to time's impact. An amazing poem is beautifully penned...10

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Swathy 13 July 2018

What a big poem👎🙆🙏😴

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Mj Lemon 22 December 2017

A wonderful poem, Soul. There is something about dandelions. They exist in a crowded communities. Perhaps their closeness is an ideal metaphor for tight friendships. Eventually, circumstances change and one must abandon the security of the collective, and so the seed flies away. Despite now the distance, the friendship remains. Great poem, Soul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2017

This poem written on Dandelion is beautiful, touching and stunning and has a philosophical ground. Highly imaginative. Let it be quoted.... Perhaps we don't know where but you deserve something Like dancing in the air you will cheer with happiness There's still a long journey Before a seed to find a site A basement to grow Taller and restart great life, Bear everything all bright... Thanks for sharing.

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Simone Inez Harriman 25 July 2017

A beautiful write that touches the soul. Always there....straight to my favorites.

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