Unwritten Soul


Dandelion


Wind hush is the sky breath
It spreads cotton wings
White and light
And it's you try to fly
Away from this ground
A field of dandelions

You traveling by the air
With the emotions there
A will to find a strength
Before grow as a new dandelion
I know u always be the brave one
Time to discover earth in your lifetime
Be brave just like other dandelion

Great to know you will be fine
Because i hope you always fine
Forbidden line is not exist
You free across the mist
No boundary for you, dandelion
Flying freely and never be afraid
The choice you take
It's not wrong to be brave
I know one day you will find a place
Somewhere for you growing strong and flowering grace
Perhaps we don't know where but you deserve something
Like dancing in the air you will cheer with happiness
There's still a long journey
Before a seed to find a site
A basement to grow
Taller and restart great life,
Bear everything all bright

Just like other dandelions
Traveling surround you is mystery
Nobody wanted to invite hurt
In the journey if it comes
Forget not poison comes with remedy
O Friend make easy stand
Close friend will never end
Understanding is the sand
For you dandelion growing strength
White wings make beautiful land
It's been a while but i know
One day you will travel far from here

In the air we'll always keep in touch
Not much what you asked as it is a must
Because my friend, you aren't like a dust
Blown to somewhere then settled in quietness
To left and ignored after the passing past
Sometimes hello don't need a bye
But now you must fly and chase your dream
As friend always be there and understand
Without hands to hold or eyes to see
and i am glad u know i always there
and i always be there

Submitted: Monday, September 05, 2011
Edited: Sunday, October 06, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

: : : : : : : : : Theme; Courage in dream: : : : : : : : :
Originally written for a friend, it was long time not read
but it's time for me to share with all...As i know our life
sometimes like a dandelion we have will to fly/got to leave,
Finding the best ground to restart life with more passion.
Life could be hard but i think we can learn from the dandelions
never give up, as we keep fly with small wings before
find a land we desired...a dream will come true but
time will tell when...
If you have a dream, be brave to land the dream :)

This not using friendship as the main theme (even it was included) but it more on a wish of a dream to land a future..
wherever you are life is always created for you, everyone deserves it

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  • Rookie - 842 Points Susan Lacovara (9/21/2013 9:51:00 AM)

    To drift, as the airborne dandelion, with a certain uncertainty...life goes a fluttering, as we a caught up on a breeze.
    Love your poem...inspiring...my new friend Soul, continue to share your gifts. And thank you for your comments on my poem For The Love Of Luna...I fall in love with the full moon each time I view it.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,818 Points Bri Edwards (7/8/2013 3:33:00 PM)

    i like the poem, i like the notes, and i like that the author is confident/brave? enough to write using english when i bet it is not her/his? first language. i like her/his artwork on the poet's page also. i sent Dandelion
    to my poemlist. i wish i could send some of the dandelions from our lawn somewhere!
    i do disagree with the use of BASEMENT. perhaps base or foundation could be used instead of basement? in my lifetime i have thought of a basement as a cellar (a bottom floor to a building, not always present in a building, which may be lived in or used for furnace etc. and/or storage) . i did check for other meanings online and found basement sometimes has meant bathroom (chiefly in New England; that's the far northeastern part of the united states) . nice thoughts from a presumably nice person...the poet. thanks for sharing. bri
    p.s. and thanks for reading 65th-birthday Gift(s) and wishing me a happy birthday. but i am a male, not a female as you implied by using the pronoun her. it was my birthday, not my wife's! no problem! ha ha (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,818 Points Frank James Davis (4/15/2013 8:40:00 AM)

    Your own Theme notes are this poem's best review.
    Dandelions will now always seem enchanted to me.
    Outstanding work, Soul! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,443 Points * Sunprincess * (12/9/2012 12:49:00 AM)

    i agree with captain your poems are wonderful and
    i especially love the poet's notes on this one..fabulous (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 248 Points Captain Cur (6/24/2012 8:47:00 AM)

    Whenever I am down in the dredges and need a kind hand
    to pull me out of the hold of despair, I turn to one of your
    magical poems and my spirit soars again. Beautiful write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 581 Points Elena Sandu (5/13/2012 9:45:00 PM)

    There's still a long journey
    Before a seed to find a site
    A basement to grow
    Taller and restart great life,
    Bear everything all bright
    How much my soul loves those words! ! I can feel my whole being as such flower, my body to earth tied, my spirit yet to fly like a dandelion clock to spread its love! Inspiring, great write.Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 131 Points Shadow Girl (10/21/2011 10:48:00 PM)

    I love this...so metaphorical, so sweet, so perfectly written..a joy to read some deep and profound thoughts in here...loved it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 87 Points Patti Masterman (10/10/2011 10:02:00 AM)

    I know that you have a huge heart. I suspected it from the very first. This writing shows your heart to the world so perfectly. I'm very happy to know you here, Soul. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 87 Points Amir Forougi (10/2/2011 2:44:00 AM)

    High strings of imaginations flying around your mind...Brilliant and shocking deductions of humor and tragedy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 521 Points Unwritten Soul (9/26/2011 11:42:00 AM)

    Thank you Jade Leong for that nice comment, if you see this, i have to say i am sorry i have no FB account: p anyway...now confirmed your guess were wrong joking hahaha, ,
    It's okay to steal it and you always free to stop by anytime :) Cheers Jade! ! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 213 Points Adeline Foster (9/19/2011 1:29:00 PM)

    Yes an interesting way to express your appreciation of this flower. Your English is improving and your grammar is becoming clearer. Read mine - The Dandelion and the Rose -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 213 Points Absent Wryta (9/17/2011 9:04:00 AM)

    'But poison comes with remedy'
    Reading this gave me hope about never giving up. Dreams and fresh starts are very much alive.
    Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Vipins Puthooran (9/15/2011 4:52:00 PM)

    It's a great poem..you are a talented poet..well written..a hope/dream can be seen in this sometimes with a brave heart. (Report) Reply

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