Eve T.M.


Dancing Rainbows - Poem by Eve T.M.

Dancing Rainbows

Have you ever viewed a scene that took your breath away?
I have and I know that it is a real given blessing
To which I can honestly say it's a grand display.

Like witnessing the grandest early morning sunrise
Which casts a golden scene on our land which can be seen
The richest of fulfillment is brought within a dream.

But alas, then came the magnificent view of rainbows
As they all danced around here and about
The illusion of how they pranced without any doubts.

It had felt like it was a given token of a second sign
This view of which would be the beauty of first
For faith of all mankind and their deepest thirst.

All the fragrant views of the gathering rainbows
In all the majestic skies within to sooth our very souls
Where there will never be any further flooding as new promises of now as it goes.

What ye shall never be an eternal fog
The blanket from our highest heaven above
As all the angels with all their endearing love.

Will be within our intuitive imagination
Heaven will hold so graciously Divine
One day our mighty heaven will gloriously whisper our souls
shall ride.

08/08/2016

Eve T.M.

Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow

Form: Terza Rima


Comments about Dancing Rainbows by Eve T.M.

  • (10/5/2016 9:53:00 PM)

    what an illusion! !
    I also would like to have such vision of dancing rainbows, as this phenomena is scientifically impossible to our naked eyes.. but the poem is very interesting with lots of rhythm and illusions..Congratulations Eve (Report) Reply

    Eve T.m.carter (10/7/2016 12:54:00 AM)

    Thank you very much for your real kind comment, I just got my computer back today. Was without it for a couple of days.

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  • (10/5/2016 1:47:00 PM)


    Wonderful poetry, congratulations for well deserved poem of the day. (Report) Reply

    Eve T.m.carter (10/7/2016 12:57:00 AM)

    Thank you very much Bill for your beauty of a comment here, on this Rainbow of a poem of mine.

    Eve T.m.carter (10/7/2016 12:55:00 AM)

    Thank you so very much Bill for your wonderful comment on this written poem of mine.

  • Seamus O' Brian (10/5/2016 11:33:00 AM)


    Congratulations on poem of the day! Keep writing, there is much talent here!
    :)
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    Eve T.m.carter (10/7/2016 12:58:00 AM)

    Thank you so very much for your warm and thoughtful comment on this poem of mine.

  • (10/5/2016 11:26:00 AM)

    A Thing of beauty
    A this of beauty is joy for ever. So true about this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (10/5/2016 8:16:00 AM)


    Written in flair and super style the poem gives a soothing feeling as one goes on line after line. Liked it. (Report) Reply

  • (10/5/2016 6:31:00 AM)


    The breath taking dancing of rainbows and it's marvel beautifully portrayed and it deserves heartiest Congrats along with the one who penned it. Congrats on the POD too. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/5/2016 4:46:00 AM)

    Superb
    Inspiring poem with vivid imagery. (Report) Reply

    Eve T.m.carter (10/7/2016 1:08:00 AM)

    Thank you so very much Mohammed for your beauty of words on this poem of mine..

  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/5/2016 1:23:00 AM)

    Beauty!
    A real given blessing. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us. (Report) Reply

    Eve T.m.carter (10/7/2016 1:02:00 AM)

    Thank you so very much Edward for your beautiful comment on this written poem of mine. I am so very honored to make poem of the day.

  • Robert Murray Smith (10/5/2016 12:24:00 AM)


    Thank you for your poetic skill. Richly deserved poem of the day.

    Robert
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    Eve T.m.carter (10/7/2016 1:01:00 AM)

    Thank you very much Robert for your real kind comment of yours, I am quite honored by making poem of the day here on Poem Hunter. I'm so very glad I came to the beauty of a poetry site.

  • Rebecca Navarre (10/4/2016 12:46:00 AM)


    Beautifully rich, with soul! Thank you for sharing it! (Report) Reply

    Eve T.m.carter (10/7/2016 1:04:00 AM)

    Thank you so very much Rebecca for your beautiful and kind words on this poem of mine.

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (10/3/2016 11:39:00 PM)

    Simply beautiful
    This view of which would be the beauty of first
    For faith of all mankind and their deepest thirst.

    All the fragrant views of the gathering rainbows
    In all the majestic skies within to sooth our very souls
    Where there will never be any further flooding as new promises of now as it goes.
    Highly sensible poem. Thanks for sharing it.
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    Eve T.m.carter (10/7/2016 1:07:00 AM)

    Thank you so very much Subhas for your beautiful words and your pleasant view on this poem of mine. when I read that I made poem of the day, I was really honored. It has been a long time since something like this made my day.

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