Dance With Me! Poem by Poetheart Morgan

Dance With Me!

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I cut my foot!

i cut only in a delirious dance
and, then, opened a vein
my vessel of blood was contained
by an white unknown man

I was rewarded!
with 2 points for remember
And 1 point in my soul
by the stranger
who stanched my blood
hold me and told me
you will never be real
in this lonely dance
dance with me!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
dance, soul, stranger, blood, unknown man, a little of love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 30 June 2013

beautiful.enjoyed. i wouldhave told u to dance with me but i do not have right. only the stranger.

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Poetheart Morgan 03 May 2013

Really Mr. Ace! It is a solitary and unique dance! But I am glad you enjoyed!

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Ace Of Black Hearts 02 May 2013

Indeed that is a dance, a dance I know all to well, roles reversed of course where the man comes in, it is instead a woman. Truly I can relate to this poem.

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Nader Baheri 06 April 2013

fabulous ending.reminded me a song by Leonard Cohen with the same title although this poem is more beautiful than his lyrics.~nb

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Unwritten Soul 31 March 2013

Dance within the heart where soul by souls paired up for a waltz.._Soul

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