Poetheart Morgan

Rookie - 397 Points (05/23/1960 / Rio de Janeiro)

Dance With Me! - Poem by Poetheart Morgan

I cut my foot!

i cut only in a delirious dance
and, then, opened a vein
my vessel of blood was contained
by an white unknown man

I was rewarded!
with 2 points for remember
And 1 point in my soul
by the stranger
who stanched my blood
hold me and told me
you will never be real
in this lonely dance
dance with me!

Poet's Notes about The Poem

dance, soul, stranger, blood, unknown man, a little of love

Comments about Dance With Me! by Poetheart Morgan

  • Gold Star - 19,816 Points Ramesh Rai (6/30/2013 4:44:00 AM)

    beautiful.enjoyed. i wouldhave told u to dance with me but i do not have right. only the stranger. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 397 Points Poetheart Morgan (5/3/2013 10:39:00 AM)

    Really Mr. Ace! It is a solitary and unique dance! But I am glad you enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,413 Points Ace Of Black Hearts (5/2/2013 6:38:00 PM)

    Indeed that is a dance, a dance I know all to well, roles reversed of course where the man comes in, it is instead a woman. Truly I can relate to this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (4/6/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    fabulous ending.reminded me a song by Leonard Cohen with the same title although this poem is more beautiful than his lyrics.~nb (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (4/1/2013 4:35:00 AM)

    There is a silver lining to even a cut foot.
    Even if you hobble on a cut foot what a dance it can be! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,497 Points Unwritten Soul (3/31/2013 3:25:00 AM)

    Dance within the heart where soul by souls paired up for a waltz.._Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 30, 2013

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