Treasure Island

Poetheart (back)

(05/23/1960 / Rio de Janeiro)

Dance With Me!


I cut my foot!

i cut only in a delirious dance
and, then, opened a vein
my vessel of blood was contained
by an white unknown man

I was rewarded!
with 2 points for remember
And 1 point in my soul
by the stranger
who stanched my blood
hold me and told me
you will never be real
in this lonely dance
dance with me!

Submitted: Saturday, March 30, 2013

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dance, soul, stranger, blood, unknown man, a little of love

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  • Ramesh Rai (6/30/2013 4:44:00 AM)

    beautiful.enjoyed. i wouldhave told u to dance with me but i do not have right. only the stranger. (Report) Reply

  • Ace Of Black Hearts (5/2/2013 6:38:00 PM)

    Indeed that is a dance, a dance I know all to well, roles reversed of course where the man comes in, it is instead a woman. Truly I can relate to this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (4/6/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    fabulous ending.reminded me a song by Leonard Cohen with the same title although this poem is more beautiful than his lyrics.~nb (Report) Reply

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