Dance Of Love Iii Poem by Marieta Maglas

Dance Of Love Iii

Rating: 5.0


When I look into your eyes, I can see myself.
Our relationship seems to be indestructible.
I give myself to you, and I become a part of you,
And there's nothing around here to me that matters.


We are together to explore our universe in unity,
Because together we can make it happen.
You're just everything to me; we are one being,
I cannot imagine the earth without you.

When you penetrate me, I become another being,
You take everything from me to give me everything.
You take everything that I am, and give yourself to me,
We love each other so much; that we feel like exploding.


There is a connection between our souls and our bodies.
We dance our laughter, our tears, we dance our madness.
Two to one heart, the souls dance in rhythm with the stars,
More intricately, we are intertwining our passions' impetus.

Ecstatic moments and rumbles of our minds and our souls,
We swallow each other deeply and deeply; it is madness.
We understand the naturally flowing rhythm of our existence.
We kiss with hate and love every part of our molecular structure.


We understand each other and our body language,
I cannot stay without you very long or live without you,
Especially at night, when you love me and get me in a trance.
From above, two souls dance their love in the same body.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 03 May 2010

i like these lines in ur poem. is a connection between our hearts and souls and bodies We dance our laughter, our tears, we dance our madness Two to one heart, two to one soul, dancing in rhythm with stars Dance is deeper, more intricately intertwined, the impetus of our passion your ecstacy u express in wondeful terms. thank you for sharing. invite u to read my poems too. thank u

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Em Jay Christian 02 April 2010

This is a really beautiful poem. The only thing I would recommend differently is the icons around the title, its takes away from the name of the poem, which adds to the whole poetic expierence. I enjoyed it alot though. Blessed Be, Em

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John Knight 29 March 2010

MARI - THIS IS BEAUTIFUL YOU HAVE EXCELLED YOURSELF IN THIS VERY VERY EMOTIVE POEM. All the emotion in the poem is summed up in the last line. 'We are two souls dancing the love dance in the same body'. Whoever inspired this lovely LOVE POEM - Mari - is the most blessed Man in the Universe. Thank you for sharing your inner heart - I love it. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 March 2010

A ‘c’ming’ into the ‘into’ poem… fine diction… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Lady Grace 28 March 2010

nice very nice... when the night starts to dark and the room is filled with joy to every kissess of cruely hurt the lips of naked bodies satisfaction is unspoken kiss mark leaves anywhere ...anywhere..everywhere...marks were left ...actually ur work is nicely done...poetic sexy words...

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Marieta Maglas

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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