Dance In The Light Poem by Amélie Peace

Dance In The Light

Rating: 5.0


Swirl, spin, turn around,
never ever stop.

Do this, do that,
move like this, move like that.

This is how we do the dance.

Gosh its fun to never care,
what happens all around.

Just you no one else,
when you do the dance.

Its s much fun and never ending,
why don't you join in too.

Just be careful, not anyone,
can dance the dance all day.

For if we all have fun all the time,
then nothing will be done.

our lives will simply fall apart,
no one will care no one will stop.

Soon death and destruction will ever bloom
like ivy grows across the ground, enticing and toxic

So just remember when you have some fun
take your turn and everyone will see the beauty of the light!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

very good and nice for recitation as a poem.

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Ejaz Khan 17 May 2009

Soft, sweet words, making their gentle entry in to inner realms. Beutifully expressed the ever present pairs of opposites, where life and death have their eternal dance. Greetings for succeding in creating beauty, though with a bitter reminding that time we got, isn't infinite. Regards

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isabelle Cote 15 May 2009

I'm jealous.ur a better writer than i: ( but dont worry, i uv IT and i luv You AL THE SAME: PCHEERS HUNNIE 10+++++

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Jessica Robert 15 May 2009

niiiiiiiiice emmmy: D veryyyy beautiful, especially the title; i really like it: D cheers darling 10 Jess

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 May 2009

'Soon death and destruction will ever bloom like ivy grows accros the ground, entising and toxic' As if these lines are dancing in front of me! Love,10++

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