Damsel In The Cloud Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Damsel In The Cloud

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Oh, the damsel in the cloud!
A poet built a home in the layer
Of the fleeting patches up there,
Just to catch your glimpse and be proud.

You came afloat and stayed a while,
The poet's gloomy face wore a smile!
Then suddenly you fell quiet,
Unannounced, you took a secret flight.

Drifted away to the Eastern sky,
That made the poet drop a sigh.
He fell back to this dusty earth,
And wondered on his real worth!


Dhaka
04 February 2016
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Friday, February 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just a fantasy...... nothing more!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 24 September 2020

Very imaginative and lovely! Only poets can have such fantasy! Enjoyed this beautifully rhyming poem!

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Hazel Durham 18 July 2017

Original and imaginative write, love the title, love the poem, thank you for sharing!

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Khairul Ahsan 23 May 2020

Thanks for mentioning the title. I take special care and give time in choosing the title of my poems and when it is appreciated, I feel so glad! Much inspired by your appreciative comment, @Hazel Durham.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 June 2016

@Edward Kofi Louis, Thanks for reading my poem and quoting from it. Thanks for the appreciation.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 June 2016

The poet's gloomy face wore a smile! Nice piece of work.

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