Damn Poem by Kareem Abdulrahim

Damn

Rating: 5.0


Damn, I'm Bleeding all over the Place.
It's on the Floor, on your Hand's, on your Face.
The Blood is from the Knife that you cut and
ripped my back with. Though You're lies Cut me Deeper
Than you'll ever know.
Your Promises are nothing now, like a dead rose crushed...
it just blows away with the wind.
One day You'll realise how you are so Blind,
and you might open your eye's
and know I was the Best you've ever had...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deanna Hughes 05 January 2007

I really liked this poem I could feel the emotional intensity. I know where your coming from aswell. Deanna

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Melvina Germain 24 October 2006

Well, the good thing is, one must realize, someone else is waiting for you to give them a chance. One must be ready to move on.--Good poem--Melvina

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Herbert Nehrlich1 26 January 2005

But you were not the best speller she ever had.... H

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Poetry Hound 26 January 2005

Ever thought of moving to Nashville and writing country music lyrics?

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