Poetheart Morgan

Rookie - 318 Points (05/23/1960 / Rio de Janeiro)

DAMASK ROSE


your thighs are absurdly
Nervous
insinuating my Rest

Your lap is Insidiously
Serene, my late-night

Margin of my poetry

but what really glows
on your track

When You arise

Is

some scent of damask rose

Disloyal

the end of all my poetry

Submitted: Friday, March 29, 2013

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poetry, damask rose, love, divert attention, scent of woman.

Comments about this poem (DAMASK ROSE by Poetheart Morgan )

  • Freshman - 1,115 Points Thomas A Robinson (4/9/2013 7:53:00 AM)

    The rose of Damask or Damascus rose is a middle eastern rose from which attar or rose oil is made that is used in perfumes.Attar is also the pen name of a persian poet from Nishapur (Modern day Iran) . He was an alchemist
    by trade which attar means.He was the maker of attar, herbs and medecines. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 318 Points Poetheart Morgan (4/1/2013 9:03:00 PM)

    Dear LA LA LA LA, it seems that my poem is even very difficult to entender. So i'll give you some tips. Just do not complain because the explanation can be very Dangerous!

    As you know, when us poets write, we can be several people, an animal or a wall, in this particular case is a man. That speaks of his beloved. A poet who loses all his strength and poetry when feels her smell. The master word here is Scent of Woman. It is the desire and the rest but also him damnation. See, how danger it is! Thanks for you comment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 773 Points Leslie Philibert (3/30/2013 6:25:00 AM)

    not sure that thighs can be nervous.... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,115 Points Thomas A Robinson (3/30/2013 3:15:00 AM)

    The sword of damocles handing over me (Report) Reply

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