Daisies Poem by Viola Grey
Daisies
If I chose this rocky path
then why do I fight
to walk through fields
of plush daisies.
You say I desire pain
and walk away from love,
but I opened the gate
you failed to find.
So, who then is to blame?
I'm only ever going to be
who I want them to see,
that person you're seeking
is a reflection of your mind.
I shall walk in the light,
shadows chill my glow
and I'll always be searching
for that glorious field
of plush daisies.
1/10/08
Much thought and sensitivity within these lines young lady. The metophores of a rocky path, a field of daisies, and you opening the gate, makes me feel someone's heart was broken along the way. Hopefully they have found a different path full of sunflowers and sunshine! Well done.
for that glorious field of plush daisies..... nay the relections of your mind ..... the narcissist in your head
Hi Viola. Keep chasing the daisies but remember the dont grow well in the shade. well done thanks for the read. Regards Dave T
Dont let the shadows chill your glow, be true to you,10 Regards Tom
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this is amazingly put together my friend... great great job here V. that person you're seeking is a reflection of your mind. I love those lines. Becca