Is It Poetry

Gold Star - 5,212 Points (1958 - / Bus-Boys And Poets, Washington D.C.)

Daffodils - Poem by Is It Poetry

She doesn't mind the great length
or the girth of it.
Bushes without leaves
are not green as he kisses it.
The woods
are not deep without tree's
that are seen.
While the path that she walks
he chose in her dream.
Stoping she dropped what it was
that he picked.
A daffodil that bleeds white sapp
if to hard it is picked.


Comments about Daffodils by Is It Poetry

  • Gold Star - 10,630 Points Bri Edwards (8/2/2015 4:07:00 PM)

    a month later i read KK's comment (below) . allium? you must have changed the photo since he saw it, he's joking, or his eyes are not good. i don't think he would lie!

    i like the poem, especially for the rhythm and rhyme (and photo) . a few typos i'll excuse, but if you care to discuss them or just ask/tell me to change them in the August showcase [where i've put this poem] let me know.

    i at first thought this might be a disguised sex poem. i'm still not sure.
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    this is interesting and will probably get some people thinking, but i left my thinking cap in another state, so this part is TOO DEEP for ME! :

    The woods
    are not deep without tree's
    that are seen.

    thanks for sharing. bri :) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 25,404 Points Kelly Kurt (7/2/2015 11:20:00 PM)

    Lovely poem, but the field of allium photo kinda threw me.
    Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 2, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, July 24, 2015


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