Daddy Come Back! Poem by Cambria's Mommy Tomlins

Daddy Come Back!

Rating: 5.0


I wonder if you think of me?
I wonder if you cry because you miss me?
I wonder if you love me?
the thoughts are making me go crazy i need you because the hole is getting bigger the hurt is getting deeper, and my heart is being torn to shreds

I dream you love!
I dream your happy!
I dream you will come back and hold me!
then i remember there only dreams and the hole gets bigger the hurt gets deeper, and my heart is still being torn

daddy tell me why i miss you, tell me why i wonder about you, daddy tell me why i dream of you and your still not here! ?
tell me why i have a hole in my heart where your suppose to me? tell me why i cry to sleep why the pain and hurt and the hate deepens? tell me why my heart is being torn apart all because of you! tell me why your not here!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anju Addanki 25 June 2009

Daddy come back is wonderful. Thw wordings are very nice and i felt the pain as well.10 vote

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i know what this feels like, i like the way you portrayed the feelings..10+ if you could plz comment on one of my poems, i would be so greatful.. thanks, alicia roseberry

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