Dad Poem by Sandra Martyres

Dad

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Dad, we watched you wither away
All of eighty kilos by night and day
The one and only saving grace,
Was your ever smiling face.
While we reached the depths of despair,
You calmly declared that life was not always fair.

Despite the breathlessness and the pain,
Never did you really complain.
You bore it all stoically
Telling us it was but folly
To keep visiting doctors to find a cure
For a fatal illness that you just had to endure.
But we refused to believe -
That eventually we would have to give up and grieve
We continued our search for newer medication
With an even greater sense of determination
Alas! Despite the doctors’ skills and our dedication
You quietly left us in search of a new destination.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 03 September 2007

Good one, thanks, carry on plz

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Poison 9901 16 September 2007

This is a very lovely tribute to your father, I to am sorry for your loss. Thank you so much for shareing this very touching piece. Welcome to Poemhunter.com 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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Leonard Lobo 30 January 2008

Sandra: What a beautiful poem to your dear Dad.... our dearest Uncle Bill. Very touching and sincere. I really enjoy your poems... Lenna

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Ron Flowers 04 January 2009

Sandra, I'm sure your dad would have been proud of this wonderful tribute to him. Ron

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Erica Olson 14 March 2009

dads are super important and that really hits when people's dads are sick and tell their feelings.(i'm not sure if that make sense) . that was really good

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Patti Masterman 18 August 2009

What a lovely tribute for a father. When someone is sick, their bare spirit seems to shine through for the world to see (for better or worse, LOL) and your dad was obviously one of the angels, and I can imagine how much you miss him now. Maybe he is a star out there too, shining his light down over you, a guardian always keeping watch. (smile)

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I liked this one. beautifully versed..... read mine papa do u know? and papa u too

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Reetessh Sabrr 25 April 2009

Oh Sandra...how u weave these emotions so heartily...every word is a intense filler of those voids in the aggrieved heart.. +10

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Kat , sorrow 31 March 2009

Such a beautiful poem, I was reading it and couldn't help but cry. thank you with love kat sorrow

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Andrew Blakemore 26 March 2009

A most beautiful and deeply touching poem Sandra. A very fitting tribute to your father. Best wishes, Andrew.

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