Déja Vu Poem by Adg

Déja Vu

Rating: 4.8


Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
Surly you do lie.
Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
We don’t see eye to eye.
Mirror, Mirror by the stairs,
Your image is surly haunting.
Mirror, Mirror by the stairs,
My self-esteem you’re taunting!
Mirror, Mirror above the sink
Are you showing my insides?
Mirror, Mirror above the sink
Why cant you give me pride?
Mirror, Mirror in my hand,
It really isn’t fair
Mirror, Mirror in my hand
I cant help but stop and stare
Mirror, Mirror on the ground,
Now you’re smashed in thousands.
Mirror, Mirror on the ground
A thousand me’s surrounding

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gold Fish 20 November 2008

Gold Fish & her fellow colleague do believe that this is half decent poem. We are liking the repetion of 'Mirror Mirror', it creates depth in this poem. What exactly do you mean when you say ' We don't see eye to eye'? We are definitely liking the title, its intriguing, it captivated our attention. GOld Fish & Co.

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DEAD PLEASURES 24 October 2008

lol great stuff. you ought to add more stuff up here for us to read =] DeadPleasures.

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Jay Lawson 09 December 2008

I love the way the words have a deeper meaning...My mirrors beautiful

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Raya Mcmanus 10 December 2008

wow, that was a well written poem. good job, keep on writing.

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Claire Samuels 10 February 2009

This is a magnificent poem. The words work for you in a way I cannot explain. This may very well be your calling. Keep up the good work!

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Dayna Verhulst 18 February 2010

A Poem That I can Truly relate to

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Coreena Dejesus 18 July 2009

Very good. A reflection of self but hiddin meanings... thanks for sharing

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Keegan Moore 01 May 2009

hey i was wondering if i could use that as a song axeman22@hotmail.com send a message if yes

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Meagan Slack 01 May 2009

This poem is soooo true... its about me 100 percent and prolly just about every other girl in this world but seriosly great poem! !

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Marissa e ' 26 February 2009

wow! . you have no idea. how much i love this poem. keep writing.10+

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