Cut Me Up Poem by chris urbaez

Cut Me Up

Rating: 5.0


Take a knife and cut me up
If you hate me you wont stop
Make me feel the pain within
As your slitting through my
Skin
Makes me weaker as i bleed
For your mercy make me plead
Hear me screaming in the dark
As you leave your painfull
Mark
Blood is running down my face
As my body you erase
Trying to cut through every
Vein
On your shirt your leaving
Stains
I wish you knew i didnt care
If you hurt me everywhere
You can slit my skin apart
But you cant cut
Through my broken heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Iron Panda 23™ 08 January 2010

: o soo friffin deep! ! ......LOVE it! ! !

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Miranda Will 05 February 2010

Thats Really Deep! I Love that you can express your self this way, its a good stress reliever.

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CourtneyJae noggle 12 November 2010

It's really deep and i love it and the rythm sceem is so goos and it makes sence

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Chris Argumenti 28 July 2010

looks like my brother still got it

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Kieran J96 24 May 2010

this is amazing piece of writing. will u read some of my dark poems. really good work, well done

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this is great. creepy but in a good way. I like the way you put words together to make your message clear. I AM FOREVER JEALOUS OF YOUR POETRY! ! ! this is being favorited.

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Kerry green evil becomes her 09 February 2010

i love your poem i love dark poetry i write it my self have a look at im in control my new poem tel me what you think

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