Cursed Shame Reviewed Poem by Susan Alldred Lugton

Cursed Shame Reviewed

Rating: 4.5


Shame, that cursed killing shame,
cascading into flooding tears.
Feelings, is it me to blame?
Shame, the knife that cuts, that sears.

Seconds, feel like hours and hours,
minutes, expanding into days,
Gone the good, like milk that sours,
the food that poisons, alters gaze.

Energies capped, deeply sapped.
Life lost sight of, joyous, never.
Fears that one is lost, entrapped,
shame hovers now, feels for ever.

Deep, that dreaded masking shame
projecting into tortured space,
body twisted, so crippled, lame
shame, a devil vile, so hard to face.

Shame, now limping back to life,
glimpsing something once again.
Moving slowly, out of strife,
the feelings gentler, now and then.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simon Whild 04 November 2005

A nice flow that belies the poem's message and creates a feel of unease. I liked it.

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Liz Munro 04 November 2005

Love the rhyme and flow of this. Nice work Susan. Added to faves. Liz.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 04 November 2005

very nicely described.

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