Cumberland Gap Imagery... Poem by Debora Short

Cumberland Gap Imagery...

Rating: 3.5


Amalgam and surreal silver fusions
Flow between two ancient peaks, blinding visions
Setting sun’s angled brilliance showcasing
Norris Lake’s halo-ed magnificence

Distant layers of tonal blue – violet
Soaring smoke-y hills and mountains delight
The sky a waning clear winter-ed blue
Contrails weave their icy patterned plaids

Wispy white apparitions of other’s down
Seeing visions from east, west, north and south
Fluffy frump – l’d original gifts
Heaven-d kilts warm imaginations

Pristine golden pastures flank the roadside
Encircled in deciduous umber-
‘d lace, evergreen hemlocks and cedars grace
Dotted cantilevered black - painted

Dairy barns dressed in Pennsylvania
Dutch quilted icons and topped mossy
Green, cows graze in bucolic peace
Fieldstone chimneys sweetly send rising thanks

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivor Hogg 10 April 2008

very descriptive writing evoking strong visual couched in poetic prose

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John Tiong Chunghoo 06 April 2008

debora, but you are so much better than myself when it comes to descriptions....great writing. you too are my cup of tea!

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Raynette Eitel 29 November 2007

Writing of nature is much like painting a landscape. You have lots of competition with wanabees who long to show how lovely nature can be. This piece is superbly written. If it were a painting, it would sell for a bundle...But we poor poets must accept accolades only! : ( Good for you, Debora! Raynette

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Sean North 28 September 2007

i like the wide open feeling it leaves me....Debora

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