Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 38,094 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Cuckoo and The Crow


With my pleasant winged thought, was somewhere?
Cuckoo, the black bird that just sang the sweetest song!
Listened and got hurt, now with unpleasant mind, here
Awake with my unfathomable disgust; I am not wrong!

Raven; the black ugly throated bird, with the unrest cry!
Flew behind the Cuckoo’s melodious song that teased her
And there bulky grey Cuckoo silently laid her eggs, a spy,
On their nest, Cuckoo’s flattery: acquired modernity’s burr.

Crow that hatches unwaged the others eggs and brings
Them up, unhurt, unflirt, like a fool, in a motherly way
They love them unto their freedom and on their wings
‘Motherly hatch by a bird of prey ‘they sadly sing with gay

Truth is always harsh and unpleasant with a flavor!
And flattery soothes the mind yet it curses for ever.

Submitted: Monday, May 06, 2013
Edited: Monday, May 06, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Cuckoo and The Crow by Aftab Alam )

  • Freshman - 1,688 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (5/20/2013 9:52:00 AM)

    Yeah u r right d truth is hard n bitter as u say in yor wondrful poem. Pls do read mine too, im yor fellow indian. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,082 Points Valerie Dohren (5/10/2013 5:49:00 PM)

    The age old story of the cuckoo invading other birds's nests, so true in life.
    A very good sonnet Atfab. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,372 Points Valsa George (5/9/2013 12:04:00 AM)

    The poor crow never knows the truth and it happily nurtures the aliens in its nest! The lazy ones thrive on the sweat and labour of the industrious! Every where there is exploitation! The last two lines contain valid truth! Enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Ruby Mostazir (5/7/2013 10:56:00 AM)

    you have a variation on topics of ur poems........
    dis is also a nice 1 (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,675 Points Wahab Abdul (5/7/2013 10:44:00 AM)

    i like the way you construct the poem...it is lovely..like it.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (5/7/2013 5:09:00 AM)

    This is an allagory, it is like saying, 'the things people get away with'. Nice poem Aftab. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,404 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/6/2013 3:09:00 AM)

    truth is always harsh. good poem. (Report) Reply

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