Crying Poem by danielle bennett

Crying



I can never talk to you
without my crying first
atleast once during that point in time
you have this curse type thing on me
it wont leave me alone either
knowing that I still love you
everything you do at night
I can either see, feel, or hear it all
i've been trying to make it stop
because I don't want to cry anymore
and with me knwoing what you're doing
only makes it worse than it should be
I don't know how to make it stop
but i'm going to find out
if it's the last thing i do

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barry A. Lanier 22 February 2009

Ah Danielle such a poignant portrayal and believe me crying is a source of inspiration in that you are human and sensitive....treasure those tears, , , , hope you get a chance to read some of my work and give me any favorites, , perhaps start with Trial of Tears.....Barry

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