Treasure Island

Edgard Canales P

(Nicaragua)

Cry In The Rain


Nightmares always the same
me either dead or in chains,
think I'm going insane
cause I cry in the rain.
Unbreakable shell re-enforced with the toughest of steel
but I cry in the rain so no one sees my bitterful tears.
I suffered for years
but never had fear.
Cause I had the Lord near
He made it all clear.
Stand in the rain and wait for that drop
to wash away all of the stains of the battles I've fought.
Close my eyes and all noise becomes faint
Rain please wash away my suffer and pain.
Simple and plain
with passion it came,
rushing through all of my veins
my sadness it drains.
Down in my soul
let the rain pour
when I Can't take it no more
my knees hit the floor.
Lighting the earth pounds
with
Thunderous sounds
words so deep and profound
with every bitterful tear that touches the ground.
Rain and tears all mixed together
combination like acid
As I'm writing this letter.
Through all my endeavors
today and forever
sunshine ahead
embrace the rain 'till
the weather it betters...

Submitted: Monday, February 06, 2012
Edited: Monday, February 06, 2012

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  • Siyabonga a Nxumalo (2/10/2012 11:11:00 PM)

    There a song by Judy Boucher, title Crying in the rain...this poem reminds me of it...your faith will take you far..good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Anhelica Velasquez (2/6/2012 1:35:00 PM)

    Stand in the rain and wait for that drop
    to wash away all of the stains of the battles I've fought maybe i should do that. verry nice poem. well expressed. amazing use of words, im gratefull i read it.... ill have to remember that. (Report) Reply

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