Cry A River Poem by Tiffany ThePirate

Cry A River

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Cry a river
broken sinner
stab your knife
into my liver
take the pain
Its all in vain
I will never be the same

I can't control this hurt inside
its far to deep
been there for a long time

So i try to hide
behind my smile
but look into my eyes
can you not see?
This pain is getting to me


***reposted. I deleted this awhile ago and felt the need to repost it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

tears are good.. they go and leave smiles most times. the second stanza.. it is too and not to. I like your poem. it flows well.

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John Knight 05 December 2009

Hi Tiffany - What am I going to do with you my Angel - 'I cant control this pain inside - its far too deep - been there for a long time'. What you need is a lot of TLC - I can give you Cyber TLC and a big Cyber Cuddle - hope it helps. Pain does go deep Angel but the love of God and the prayers of those who love you go deeper. 'Forget the things which are behind - let go and let God liftyou up onto higher ground. Love you in Poetry and in the Spirit - JOHN X X

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