Treasure Island

Indranil Bhaduri

(Kolkata, India)

Cry


Once upon a time,
We walked with hand in hand
Over the grazing fields,
With grins and blushes
Splashing all over us.
A hut nearby
Speaks to me still,
In silent notes,
With the green fields
And the soothing winds
Kissing my soul over and over.
I still live today for you
Looking at the distant horizon
With smiles and tears,
Under the Sun
Trying to touch your invisible shadow
With my far cry
And seeking to change
The story of no return.

Copyright © 2013 Indranil Bhaduri

Submitted: Wednesday, July 10, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, July 10, 2013

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  • Beach Girl (8/13/2013 7:43:00 AM)

    Lovely poem Indranil! It truly imparts yearnings for a lost love and the heart's hollow feelings of a love that can't be replaced. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (7/25/2013 2:37:00 PM)

    The pain of losing a love one can be devastating. Not a day goes
    by without thinking about it as your poem expresses. Maybe that
    love will be renewed again which brings to mind my poem If Ever We
    Meet Again. Love will come again my friend. Excellent write. (Report) Reply

  • Kavya . (7/25/2013 4:27:00 AM)

    story of no return.......hmmm...an amazing write.........losing a loved one is very painful when one knows that it wont return........ (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (7/23/2013 11:34:00 PM)

    I wish you all success in turning the story of no return into one of no parting! A beautiful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (7/23/2013 5:12:00 AM)

    Trying to touch your invisible
    shadow
    With my far cry
    And seeking to change
    The story of no return.
    beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (7/20/2013 12:05:00 PM)

    Beautiful memories linger forever with a love that never ends and the terrible pain of losing! !
    So deep with a haunting beauty! ! (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (7/19/2013 11:55:00 PM)

    The nostalgia over your lost love is painful but sweet here. But I think the title can be modified a little differently. (Report) Reply

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