Crowing Subsides Poem by K.S.Subramanian Subramanian

Crowing Subsides



Damp still, sun's rays trapped
in the womb of monsoon clouds;
As if the morning star was too
circumspect to break through the
sullen haze of uncertainty;
A herd of crows keep drilling
Into my unresponsive ears their
anxious search for morning crumbs.
Blame them not; they need to
see the day ease out.

Yeah! Is the day done with buying
a sheaf of groceries, craftily spun
T-shirt, relishing mouthfuls of
masala-laced dishes? Or is it all
to an existence which begins in
the dark ….and ends there?

A query that peters out like vaporous
wispy clouds; its hue changes
before the wink of an eye.
Uncertainty too is cloudy, empties
sooner than one can spot it.

Their crowing is down to a satiated groan now.
They or some have found their crumbs.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It was early morning and the crows' din was quite high.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2014

Yeah it is the day with buying, nicely expressed everything in this poem. Beautiful one.

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