Crooked Halo Poem by Kaila George

Crooked Halo

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People say I have this Halo

That sits upon my head

I look at them very strangely

And I start to shake my head


No I have none and if it is there

Then its a crooked one


Can never keep it straight

It just slops to one side

I have tried my very best

To keep it straight

Just like the path I take


But no matter how hard I try

It just never stays on straight

And I always seam to get lost

When I walk a crooked path



But I still think

People are just blind

I really dont have one

If I do its a crooked one

Imperfections the name

Of my crooked halo here


So if you ever feel something

Up on top of your head

and it starts to lean to oneside

Ha... there ya go...you got a

Crooked halo too

Sunday, March 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: humorous
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 22 May 2014

The tittle suckered me in, a really nice write, don't we all have crooked halos? its what makes us human, of course some halos are more crooked then others, but in the end things even out in their own way. and if you think you walk a crooked path, mine has gone down so many zig zags, its put a licence on how far I can walk. I THINK I like your halo

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 10 April 2014

Very well written. Enjoyable read. Would be nice if we were like angels maybe we would not have a crooked halo.

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