Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,733 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Crisis Of Humanity - Poem by Aftab Alam

Awake, awake O Bravo where you slept?
our Home burning, many a times we wept
When darkness becomes bright, humanity left
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Comments about Crisis Of Humanity by Aftab Alam

  • Freshman - 593 Points Ruby Mostazir (6/10/2013 8:19:00 AM)

    forgot to vote....10 obviously! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 593 Points Ruby Mostazir (6/9/2013 12:00:00 PM)

    short but nice & so meaningful....love this rhymes.
    our world is really in crisis n it makes me sad very often (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 534 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (5/28/2013 8:24:00 AM)

    We are facing the Siberian chilling wind of nepotism and shivering with seal before the ballot! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,896 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/28/2013 7:01:00 AM)

    our feeling has been lost, You are great really Aftab, my brother, I like it.10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (5/28/2013 5:51:00 AM)

    So nice rhyming couplets conveying wonderful message! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 827 Points Yasmeen Khan (5/28/2013 12:39:00 AM)

    It's the plight of whole humanity....a powerful message conveyed with force, an awakening call (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (5/27/2013 11:00:00 PM)

    this is yrs wonderful poem, short, crisp, very meaning full, and clear and clean poetry, love it...10 (Report) Reply








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