Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,822 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Crisis Of Humanity - Poem by Aftab Alam

Awake, awake O Bravo where you slept?
our Home burning, many a times we wept
When darkness becomes bright, humanity left
Ah! Doom of the day we accepted and kept

Save save innocent must be saved
Tears, Cries and blood what we have paved
Shame shame our feeling has been lost
Deaf, dumb and blind, we are paying the cost


Comments about Crisis Of Humanity by Aftab Alam

  • Ruby Mostazir Ruby Mostazir (6/10/2013 8:19:00 AM)

    forgot to vote....10 obviously! (Report) Reply

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  • Ruby Mostazir Ruby Mostazir (6/9/2013 12:00:00 PM)

    short but nice & so meaningful....love this rhymes.
    our world is really in crisis n it makes me sad very often (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran Nasarudheen Parameswaran (5/28/2013 8:24:00 AM)

    We are facing the Siberian chilling wind of nepotism and shivering with seal before the ballot! (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra Gajanan Mishra (5/28/2013 7:01:00 AM)

    our feeling has been lost, You are great really Aftab, my brother, I like it.10 (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (5/28/2013 5:51:00 AM)

    So nice rhyming couplets conveying wonderful message! (Report) Reply

  • Yasmeen Khan Yasmeen Khan (5/28/2013 12:39:00 AM)

    It's the plight of whole humanity....a powerful message conveyed with force, an awakening call (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul Wahab Abdul (5/27/2013 11:00:00 PM)

    this is yrs wonderful poem, short, crisp, very meaning full, and clear and clean poetry, love it...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 27, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 5, 2013


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