Tiku akp


Creeper - Poem by Tiku akp

Staid and serene as a rustic soul
It slithers up towards the sky;
The fluffy claws cling to the bark
Like a newborn and counter
The mighty wind;

Even the age-old banyan
Can’t escape the innocent hugs
Of tilted circles;

It feeds on the earth and invades
The umbrageous woods
To swing in nothingness


Comments about Creeper by Tiku akp

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (3/13/2012 3:43:00 AM)

    Nice poem with imagery. I think it represents some people of our society. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 246 Points Supriya Prathapan (1/17/2012 7:09:00 AM)

    A creeper beautifully described. The fluffy claws cling to the bark
    Like a newborn, Well written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sugra Malik (9/13/2011 3:37:00 AM)

    awesme...impresd
    thankz for sharing

    regards
    sugra (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,125 Points Elena Sandu (7/7/2011 6:45:00 PM)

    Why do I feel that it has a hidden message? Not sure if is really all only about creeper only, very nice described here, though the wind of this poem carries me to find similarities within our society, was it intended so or should I try to control the wind?
    Nice writing thank you for share,10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (6/26/2011 8:34:00 AM)

    Great poem. I was impressed. It was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.
    Best regards
    Akmal (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 26, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, June 27, 2011


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