Lucifera Santez

Rookie - 33 Points (4th feb / Belize)

Creature


It is a cold world,
All this pain,
All this rage,
Do you know its my homage?
Yeah that’s what I have become,
A creature feeding on despair,
A freak relishing in pain,
You made me this,
Don’t you remember,
You fashioned this deranged me,
After you burned my soul,
And trapped me in this hideous mortality,
So yes I laugh when I should cry,
I give up when I should try,
You broke me,
And now here I am,
Celebrating my downfall with yet another sin,
Grandly for world to see………………….

Submitted: Friday, November 15, 2013
Edited: Friday, November 15, 2013

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  • Rookie - 649 Points Paul Brookes (11/26/2013 4:36:00 AM)

    You can in time shakes of the shell another has enforced on you and become another one fashioned by the self. The world is what we make it A well written poem if a little dark BB (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Charles Monroe (11/26/2013 4:34:00 AM)

    In Lucifera's mirror
    I see myself a creature
    That crept from desks gratified
    And tried to be the teacher
    But soon became the student
    And them became a dream
    And then a stupid nightmare
    Where walls are velveteen.
    O Lucifera's mirror
    A kiss for your reflection
    Or worthy of remembrance
    In all the world's perception.
    Are we but eve-less dawns
    Or English theme-less songs
    My weakness, seems less strong
    As I accept my wrongs
    And me, I see more clearer
    In Lucifera's mirror.
    P.X
    11_26_13_ 2: 35AM (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,128 Points Lyn Paul (11/15/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    I do not believe it is a cold world yet oh there are some COLD and callous humans out there. But life is about survival and can we survive it? Thank you Lucifera (Report) Reply

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