Creative Mind Poem by Subbaraman N V

Creative Mind

Rating: 4.8


God created man with mind
Man in all his creative mind
Transformed earth into merry Heaven!

Dirty man under devil's hold
Keeps that manna away from the world
Robs the charm away from the whole!

Creative mind
Conceptualizes
Comprehends
Concretizes
And through its marvelous creation
Entices
Enchants
Enriches
Enlivens
Ennobles
Enthralls!
Brings peace and joy
Makes every one enjoy
Provides endless joy!

Let
Millions blossom with creative mind
Myriad blessings storm the mankind!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gita Ashok 25 June 2010

This is an extremely creative composition, indeed. Single words used in most lines of the second stanza create a magical effect within the poem. Let Millions blossom with creative mind Myriad blessings storm the mankind! Kudos to your creative mind! Marvellous composition!

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Kesav Easwaran 03 August 2008

those last lines give the beautiful message on how to build a heaven on earth, of course with the help of His grace…10

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Abha Sharma 24 March 2008

a tribute to all creative minds...., they become immortal through their creations....

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Linda Ori 01 March 2008

We are what we believe, and we create our existence by our thoughts. You make that very clear in this writing. We are capable of creating great beauty, but also great sadness. It's up to us to make this life experience the best we can. Otherwise, why are we here? Great perspective - your thoughts are very deep, and I suspect that you are also very intuitive. Linda :)

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Melvin Banggollay 08 January 2008

Great poem. truly, the mind has all the guts to think wise and bad. Man should strive to cling only to what is good. thanks and best wishes, melvin

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Subbaraman N V

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Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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