Dorian Petersen Potter


Creation (Star of David)


God
Is the
Creator
He made the whole
Universe and formed man
The Bible doesn't explain where God just came from
But it says clear that He was always there
This is a mystery to me too
But I just believe, accept
God created all just perfect
In fact made us good and pure
Adam and Eve had wonderful lives
They ruled over everything God made
Adam just didn't have to work for a living
Didn't face pain or death
Till both did sin
After that
It was
Hell

Submitted: Saturday, July 20, 2013
Edited: Monday, July 22, 2013

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The 'Star of David' is a new poetry
form created by Dorian Petersen Potter,
on October 22,2009.

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