Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 4,127 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Creation Of The End - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

God created man
God created woman
God created love

We created war
we created hate
we started something
that nobody else can finish
until the earth is gone

We created self destruction

Comments about Creation Of The End by Dave Alan Walker

  • Rookie - 21 Points Gary Kedron (4/16/2013 11:17:00 PM)

    Powerful....saying so much in so few verses, with much truth (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,769 Points David Wood (4/5/2013 10:42:00 AM)

    Nicely written & true. We seem to be heading down the self destruct road. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,731 Points Valerie Dohren (3/29/2013 4:35:00 PM)

    Man is certainly on the road to self-destruction, unless he opens his eyes and starts to see it. Well said and well written. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 28, 2013

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