Creation Cycle Poem by Elizabeth Middleton

Creation Cycle



Something is made because someone cares about it.
What gives it value, is how much that person cares for it.
Everyone cares, but not everyone fights for what they love,
Yet it is that battle that determines life or death.
It is a long and hard battle,
But the victory is sweet!
Everyone watching a victory, gains hope.
Those who loose grow as hard as the battle was,
Those watching the loss, gain fear.

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It sounds to me that you are writing about something everyone wants to get... I don't think it's actually true that every single person wants the same thing and people must fight for it. The fight is usually caused by twisted envy; other people who have no life - boredom pushes them to do nasty things, not their ambition... The rule is: don't stand on anybody's way if you know you don't want it or you can't be good enough; find your own way and don't mimic anyone just for the sake of getting the satisfaction when you knock somebody down... Good write... thank you for sharing...

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