Rik Bertrand

Rookie (18 April 1959 / Portland, Oregon)

Create My World


CREATE MY WORLD

Create a world of your own desires,
where all the heroes are all the liars.
Feel it full of empty visions,
idle love and indecisions.

Create a time where there’s no hope,
where life hangs by a rope.
Feel it full of empty dreams,
Where nothing is what it seems.

Create a space where you can run,
where sadness lingers in the sun.
Where hope has vanished needlessly,
where feeling love can never be.

Create a life with emotions lost,
where with every decision you pay a cost.
Where crying is the better way,
and the blues is with you everyday.

Create this world and you will see,
Through the eyes of lonely me.

REB

Submitted: Thursday, September 04, 2008
Edited: Sunday, September 07, 2008

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  • Rookie Ame Zap (2/22/2011 1:45:00 PM)

    This is very sad! Sometimes everyone feels this way one time of their life. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (9/8/2008 8:14:00 AM)

    i liked the way you created the picture of the world of your imagination
    and at the same you also give a valubale message to the reader that we need to change it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Silence Dogood (9/7/2008 10:49:00 AM)

    This poem is great, I love how you make people see how you se the world.Its deffinetly a well writen poem that displays great emotion. (Report) Reply

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