Create My World Poem by Rik Bertrand

Create My World

Rating: 5.0


CREATE MY WORLD

Create a world of your own desires,
where all the heroes are all the liars.
Feel it full of empty visions,
idle love and indecisions.

Create a time where there’s no hope,
where life hangs by a rope.
Feel it full of empty dreams,
Where nothing is what it seems.

Create a space where you can run,
where sadness lingers in the sun.
Where hope has vanished needlessly,
where feeling love can never be.

Create a life with emotions lost,
where with every decision you pay a cost.
Where crying is the better way,
and the blues is with you everyday.

Create this world and you will see,
Through the eyes of lonely me.

REB

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ame Zap 22 February 2011

This is very sad! Sometimes everyone feels this way one time of their life.

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Chitra - 08 September 2008

i liked the way you created the picture of the world of your imagination and at the same you also give a valubale message to the reader that we need to change it

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Silence Dogood 07 September 2008

This poem is great, I love how you make people see how you se the world.Its deffinetly a well writen poem that displays great emotion.

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Rik Bertrand

Rik Bertrand

Portland, Oregon
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