Crazy Llove Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Crazy Llove

Rating: 4.5


I am holding a knife
By which to end my life
Driving it through my guts
You may consider me nuts
But i dare to swear
That i`ll be there
Meeting in paradise
Life would be fair
Following you to hell
Shows you how much i care
Please, end your life
I know we will survive
Use the same knife
So love can bring us alive

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tatianna Rei Moonshadow 30 August 2008

the picture of crazy love... I've thought it plenty of times myself

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 September 2008

Love is always crazy, and the poem is also. Emotional composition.10 for it.

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anne adam 21 November 2008

i love it i love it i love it it's sooo nice love poem u rock

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Elena Winters 21 November 2008

wow this truly is crazy love (lol) love the poem.....in a strange way (lol just joking 10 awsome piece

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Reina Lorenzo 22 November 2008

oh, how love could be so dangerous! ! strong piece.. love it! !

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Gina Layog 26 September 2010

you seek an end... to this insanity, to this cruelty.... both worlds collide.... you see no hope... but on the contrary.. hope and love are intwined

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Dwi Utami 05 September 2010

I see everything looks very good for crazy love you write this poetry like crazy love is true your poetry so nice for the first sequence. 10+

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Sherri Coulter 12 September 2009

I bleed easy, blue eyes, doesn't take much.............10+

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Kesav Easwaran 31 May 2009

'Following you to hell Shows you how much i care'... this expression constitues the soul of the poem, Blue Eyes...good piece...i liked...10

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Ana Guerrero 13 March 2009

Very beautiful it's just beautiful

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