Crazy Light Poem by David Blake

Crazy Light

Rating: 4.9


What is it that you see, when you
look across your life through the
debris? Do you see your ideas,
memories and dreams or do you
see what you still could be?
What of the places you once
longed to go or the love you
thought you would now know?
Are you filled with regret in
constant lament or are you still
trying to grow? When you close
your eye’s at night in gentle sleep
do you still see me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 17 October 2007

subtle love shrouded in a little poem. keep on david.

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Margery Rehman 25 August 2007

A good and poignant piece. Well put with sincerity. Regards, MargeryR.

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... Lynch 24 August 2007

Wow, great write. Beautiful and thought provoking. -Kylie M. Lynch

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Katie P 24 August 2007

i love it! the writing is really good... keep it up!

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