Crazy Poem by Beach Girl

It sounds like, a dead body climbed on top of you. Temporary paralysis to me.....iip

lots of time I feel rather crazy but I regroup. good write life makes us that way

Very nicely written. Keep going

You seem to have an obsession with sea. So these feelings are not crazy but natural.

very nice.style and concept is beautiful.liked it.

Love at its best is crazy and that is good, your passion for the sea is beautifully written!

iip's comment was certainly interesting! i hope his interpretation was not accurate. i guess it depends on what your surroundings were, as to whether or not you were crazy. My guess, though, is YES! , U were crazy. just kidding. of course it may not be YOU in the poem. fantasy? interesting rhyme pattern and alternating length of lines. nice. bri :)

Feeling crazy means you are in full of life. you are living the life with it's excitements.since you love the sea, it's beauty you are hallucinated with it..... liked it

When we love something so much our minds conjures up past experiences that It seems like we are reliving it all over again. The beautiful beach with its azure skies and clear water are enticing. Yo go girl! Nice and enjoyed.

Lovely, like it well done, keep writing...