Crash! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Crash!

Rating: 5.0


My mind is not catching
With your tunes
My mind is not catching
With your music
My mind is not catching
With your rhythms
My mind is not catching
With your voice
My mind is not catching
With your song.
My mind is not matching
With your heartbeats
My mind is not matching
With your love
My mind is not matching
With your speed.
My mind is not matching
With your words.

I am on crash diet or
Is diet crashing me?
Diet not matching me
Weight is catching me!
Making me plumpy and plumpy.
Confused with match and catch.

My mind is not catching your signal! !

I am just confused
With match and catch.
Nothing just landed in a CRASH!
Opps! Just NetWork Crashed! ! !
Chill.....

Let's have a TEA BREAK with Choco Chipps! ! !
One Smile Please!

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
2014

Tuesday, December 31, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
TEA BREAK! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 31 December 2013

A great poem, made me smile. The cookies do it every time. Thank you very much for your very kind comments about me as a poet.

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Tadasha Tripathy 31 December 2013

Wonderful thought.Mem I wish you and your family a very very happy new year.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 January 2014

Nice catch of matching words gathered in a poem. Fun to read. Thank you.

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Hazel Durham 01 January 2014

Entertaining write with a great play on words and it made me smile!

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Rubab Atwal 01 January 2014

made me smile..amazing poem...enjoyed it alot.....

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 10 September 2014

Remarkable piece with a lot of wisdom and fun indeed.....Geetha.......very well expressed with powerful words

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Om Chawla 30 January 2014

A truly entertaining poem. How well you have played with the words. Enjoyed it.

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Amitava Sur 13 January 2014

Nice entertainer..... love to read & relax with you in the tea break

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Noreen Carden 12 January 2014

Dear Geetha A great poem making all of us smile.A definite ten.Many thanks for the lovely comments and the message you left in my comments page it means so much.you are a lovely person whose kindness shines through. God bless

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Rajesh Thankappan 01 January 2014

Should I stop smiling after one read? No, no, I shall read this poem ten times over and keep on smiling!

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