Cracks Poem by Daniel Brown

Cracks

Rating: 3.7

Built upon my broken back,
Upon a broken shore.
Stretching out beyond the sea,
And past the open door.
Splinters of a tortured past,
Memories before.
Before the fall,
Before the end,
Of all that was,
Will be...
No more...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 23 March 2024

There are something's we don't want to re-live. Yet I see hope in this poem, hope for better times. An open door to new experiences a crack that we can squeeze through.

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Alex Alexander 20 March 2024

How we all needed to be reminded. It should not beforgotten. Great!

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