(September 3,1992)

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Courage From My Alter Ego

Yes! My lad, You are a bright rising star!
Listen, And I'll tell you why that's right,
You got more than you thought you could have,
Coming till now with mind and not with might!

No one could stop, when you did want to be
The best out of all, in school, and in street
Success is drug! And thats all you need!
Fight for your place, But like a man of the lead

Hard times will come! But its just a test!
You may fret! not knowing south, east and west!
Push and push harder, when others ease with rest
When God is with you, You'll bring out the best!

So rise along all the way, Reach for the sky,
Rule this world, but with heart and its love!
You cant win unless you're determined to try!
Work hard! Sweat more! You will fly all above

You have a dream, which you should live for!
And I do believe! Yes! That you can do more
You'll grow as a man whom world will adore!
Be the king of this world! Just keep legs on the floor!

Submitted: Monday, March 04, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, March 05, 2013


Poet's Notes about The Poem

If it motivates, great!

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  • Lu Conner (3/7/2013 6:38:00 AM)

    As my pen name says: Im looking up to more incredible work like this.

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  • Chandra Thiagarajan (3/5/2013 7:58:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem from so young a person instilling courage to your self and to those who read it.! I feel all youngsters should read your beautiful poem and get inspiration.The last para' is the jewel and I'm sure you'll be the king of the world! ! With all best wishes! !

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  • Little King Of Sorrows (3/4/2013 1:07:00 PM)

    Coming till now with mind and not might. I like that. A great reference how the pen is mightier than the sword. I was very much inspired young grasshopper. Well written my friend.

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  • Unwritten Soul (3/4/2013 10:18:00 AM)

    I like the alter ego of you is the bright side, you already bright one just it is good your reflection is brighter..then it may make you fee stronger..anyway both of you are one..and you know u deserve it to be stronger better_Soul

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  • Gulsher John (3/4/2013 9:10:00 AM)

    This is one of the better poem I read, I like the hope and optimism you reflect in your lines, construction and rhyming is also fabulous, full marks to you dear bard
    Keep this optimism and you will live better life'''''''''

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