Courage Poem by justin kamara

Courage



where is courage?
I believe in courage
it is with in you
you can not see it

courage is something
that you feel with in you
A person with strenght
and courage is a majority
of other.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alicia Patti 28 February 2007

This is very good, Justin. Your hard work is paying off. You need to make 'with in' one word, as 'within.' The following word is spelled wrong: 'strenght.' Please look it up. You can leave off the last line entirely, because it does not add to the poem. Otherwise I enjoyed reading this. Keep on studying. alicia

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