Countless 'Thanks' And Worthless 'sorry' Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Countless 'Thanks' And Worthless 'sorry'

Rating: 4.8


I am sorry!
Sorry, is sometimes 'Countless'.
like the waves swipe and step on my feet
like the rain washes and dip down my body and
like the stars smile and fall on my head
''Thank you''
Thanks, is sometimes 'Worthless'.
as an impeached King.
as a gangrenous lips of a Lover.
as a sapphire in the mouth of a snake.
as an elixir in the hands of Lucifer.
as salt in honey and
as sugar in fish curry.
But I'll not say,
'''countless Thanks and a worthless sorry''

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Minu Alex 05 October 2011

This I really liked! ! crushed under the weight of Countless 'Thanks' And Worthless 'Sorry'.Part of the game and all are supposed to play it!

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Minu Alex 05 October 2011

This I really liked! ! crushed under the weight of countless thanks and worthless sorry! part of the game.all of us are supposed to play it! 10 4 u

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Jenny Gordon 18 September 2011

Hmmm. Thought-provoking. Apologies are indeed 'countless' since we fall short numerous times daily. The imagery you employed for the two words under consideration seems excellent for the first, but I presently do not see how it is applicable for the second. While gratitude is often feigned, yet how is it similar to the illustrations you used and how is it so dangerous? Interesting with beautiful imagery.

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Stefanie Fontker 18 September 2011

You're very right, 'sorry' hardly holds any worth anymore. Lovely write.

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