Counting Stars Through Your Eyes Poem by Unwritten Soul
Counting Stars Through Your Eyes
Dark was born to show light
As secret of stars revealed at night
No matter how dark was your heart
I still found the beauty of your side
Do i need to look at the sky
When i can see stars reflected on your eyes
Don't need to read the constellation as my guide
When i can find shine of trust through your eyes
Counting stars through your eyes
Maybe i missed to count many shines
Though i count each one from what your eyes shared...
But how our eyes can map the whole universe
When imperfection is part of us
No matter how dark they colored your words
As dark was born to show the light
Truth will shine over the shade
As much as stars revealed at night
Counting stars through your eyes
No matter how many shines i missed
As long as i can find them on you with your smile
I know that you the one that deserve my trust
but somehow i found myself again when i look stars above
about this poem...
This is how i look my life on others...How bad we are, keep good value with us, bad past will guide us a way, giving a chance for past mistake can be good for making better understanding and its not wrong for us to give someone a chance..In friendship/relationship trust and honest is a must...Sometimes we did mistakes but we arent born to be always perfect so let we accept imperfection what we made and what people made...To walk in moving time, i learned a lot through pain and smile, i learned that dont feel bad when people mistaken your bad, truth will come as light win over dark. Whatever we have been and will going, never lost each other, friends forever and love unites all people and hate is a reason why it never be happened_Soul
The very title of the verse attracts the attention. it has some very beautiful lines: But how our eyes can map the whole universe When imperfection is part of us''. Human soul is capable of this, and this's been mu favorite quote: 'secret of stars is revealed at night.
dear soul i dooooooooooo liked it. i dont know why u think its not strong? ? ? ? it was my heart sayings, as well.
stars...... that gleam in the dark... like your honesty too!
No matter how dark they colored your words As dark was born to show the light Truth will shine over the shade As much as stars revealed at night! ............nice theme. Truth can't be hidden in spite of several veils it must come out and will shine over the shade. Mistakes are dark like and these can be good for making better understanding. This is a beautiful poem with lofty insight. Thanks for sharing.
Ever So Strong And Beautiful! ! ! ! ! A Very Powerfully Moving Poem! ! ! ! ! Shines With True Gold! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Again And Again, Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +
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4/18/2024 5:01:14 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Hi soul this is a beautiful poem well done