Counting Poem by Napolean Brin

Counting



I am trying to live,
When could hardly breathe.

I have got broken knees,
But a long walk awaits.

Sun's and moon's light collides,
Still dark is everywhere.

In this shiny dawn,
Lightening is fear.

Mind is speeding like waves,
Neither storm, nor hope for calm.

Heart is left free,
Scared for it explodes.

Counting
Friday, December 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lost,poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is about a lost life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 10 December 2017

An insightful depiction of life at its lowest ebb, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Brin.

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