Could Be You Poem by Manonton Dalan

Could Be You



drizzle came scaring spider
raffling down for safe cover
frogs jump to closest grass
blinking, letting rain pass
kois are still beneath ripples
fading forest of thousand craters

balls of rain on bonzai leaves
pretty, crystal clear, edging ribs
peebless showered by splattering sand
like brown candies on sidewalk stand
staggered rocks having a cool bath
flowing, cascading to cobblestone path

hungry crow paid visit from a tree
spotted earthworm wiggling it's way
kid run out with cute paper boat
put it on water encouraging to float
could be you cheering up a friend
in time of slump or brewing pain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 14 September 2008

A nice poem with good imegery.

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Estrella Baldemosa 08 September 2008

beautiful imagery...keep it up

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Anna jonson 01 September 2008

what a poem...good description of nature keep going

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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