Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

*cosmic Music - Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

that soft music
it does'nt seem to be
falling into my ear it has not stopped either
it is just that
my thought is not on it there

nature seems to be in awe of it everywhere
nature seems to be
swinging and swaying
singing and dancing
along with it every where
nature seems to be living with it forever
is that why
nature has stopped ageing forever

this it cosmic

Comments about *cosmic Music by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

  • Rookie K. V. Venkataramana (5/23/2009 1:19:00 AM)

    Nature knows how to keep herself happy with its secret formula. Let us all emulate Nature and be happy. Congrats to the author for introducing this beautiful poem to the readers! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Sandhya S N (5/19/2009 12:38:00 AM)

    Yea. good poem
    knowing the secret of nature's beauty (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 104 Points Raj Arumugam (5/18/2009 3:41:00 AM)

    ah, you have heard nature's music! That is wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Anjali Sinha (5/17/2009 8:05:00 PM)

    nature in itself is this universal cosmic music
    look at the swaying of the branches and leaves
    hear the thunder--the cosmic music
    lovely write dear Sam
    -10 anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 177 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (5/16/2009 10:40:00 PM)

    Nature doesnot age. Fallen autumn leaves become manure and new leaves sprout in the spring..................and the music of Nature is forever for us, those with ears to listen. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarvesh Kulkarni (5/16/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    this universal theme very well expressed.
    thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (5/14/2009 12:54:00 AM)

    A good theme handled well in the poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,340 Points Ken E Hall (5/13/2009 4:58:00 AM)

    Your right music is in nature in hot summer nights our wooded orchestra is always conducted by the crickets... nice twist in the poem...loved it
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 627 Points Subbaraman N V (5/12/2009 1:36:00 AM)

    Yes, it should be.........! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (5/11/2009 9:29:00 PM)

    Music, like nature, is ageless. Beautiful write.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 111 Points Meggie Gultiano (5/10/2009 6:10:00 AM)

    a nice write and a minute to ponder to me.Love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (5/8/2009 3:18:00 AM)

    It is not everyone that can see natures dance, you have and describ ed it beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Barry A. Lanier (5/7/2009 11:34:00 PM)

    Nature's awe is constant only the temperature rising.... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,443 Points Louis Rams (5/7/2009 10:25:00 PM)

    music like nature does age, but with time it becomes something of beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Joseph Poewhit (5/7/2009 12:22:00 AM)

    All of GODS heaven plays music. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,076 Points C. P. Sharma (5/6/2009 12:05:00 PM)

    Irony of man's life while the whole universe rejoices his petty ego torments him.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carl Harris (5/6/2009 11:36:00 AM)

    This is a pleasing and well written poem, samanyan, and features fine imagery in it from beginning to end. It is a thought provoking poem, but does so gently, and nature is such a great subject to write about. Carl. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (5/6/2009 11:36:00 AM)

    this cosmic poem reads good...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (5/6/2009 7:50:00 AM)

    beautiful write........... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (5/6/2009 4:44:00 AM)

    A very enjoyable concept and a great read, thanks Sam,
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 4, 2009

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