...Cosmic Me Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

...Cosmic Me

Rating: 5.0


in these futile
spasms of existence,
some cobwebs,
still unstirred,
support this life
with their indelible words
of a forgotten wisdom.

the aum-kaar
that spur as the first voice,
of the created universe,
still echoes in my veins,
and arrives in the pupil of my eyes,
as the secret of my being.

my inner world,
remains still unborn
and as the birth of my being
sets it's first felt ripples
of pain,
from that holocaust
of birth pangs,
my emotions evolve,
with the roar of a thunder,
that leaves pug-marks on the moon.

the scattered stardust
is the ashes of my long lost
sputtered incarnations,
heaving softly
...each time the creator breathes….


-by sarvesh and indira babbellapati.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Pandey 17 July 2009

brilliant poem sarvesh...I loved every bit of it.....10

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Adi Cox 10 July 2009

I like your style of writing sarvesh. 'Cosmic Me' is a poem where you show off and fly with your wild imagination. I do not know what 'aum kaar' is but I do like the way you describe it within you, in the second verse. This poem was enjoyable to read.10/10.

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Ritty Patnaik 09 July 2009

a power packed poem of a cosmic being! sarvesh it is a fantastic poem.i just loved going through it.

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Ritty Patnaik 09 July 2009

a power packed poem! sarvesh your many incarnations have been so good, you are sarvesh now. for us.keep writing.god bless you.

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Roshni D'Souza 08 July 2009

Stunning piece you have here...beautiful imagery, flow, and excellent choice of words. Great job!

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