Correct Revelation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Correct Revelation

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Whether you agree or disagree
The poet may feel it not free
That may upset him for next poem
He may concentrate more on them

The theme does not change
The youth can not turn into old age
The poetry is such flow
Even zigzag may have to allow

The moon does not become sun
The stars can not come near soon
You try to sleep in night
In dreams you can not fight

So long it gives universal message
Make poet a happy person by comment on his page
Pick up good points for personal change
If that suits your temperamental phase

The poem must be given due respect
If not read here then pick up the comments
That might have been read somewhere
It may strengthen points here

The readers may know correctly
What other people think rightly
It may find now right evaluation
The poet may find now correct revelation

Wednesday, April 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 April 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 11 mins · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 April 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome Maricela Ramírez and Emilia Ayuk like this. 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

I love it Kayla Clark22 minutes ago I think you did a great job of giving advice AND putting it into poem form. Good Job! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

Is good Hector Babilonia23 minutes ago needs work

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

Whether you agree or disagree The poet may feel it not free

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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