Conversation On Woman.. Poem by Randhir kaur

Conversation On Woman..

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When God created woman he was working late on the 6th day.......
An angel came by and asked.' Why spend so much time on her? '
The lord answered. 'Have you seen all the specifications I have to meet to shape her? '
She must function on all kinds of situations,
She must be able to embrace several kids at the same time,
Have a hug that can heal anything from a bruised knee to a broken heart,
She must do all this with only two hands, '
She cures herself when sick and can work 18 hours a day'
THE ANGEL was impressed' Just two hands.....impossible!
And this is the standard model? '
The Angel came closer and touched the woman'
'But you have made her so soft, Lord'.
'She is soft', said the Lord,
'But I have made her strong. You can't imagine what she can endure and overcome'
'Can she think? ' The Angel asked...
The Lord answered. 'Not only can she think, she can reason and negotiate'
The Angel touched her cheeks....
'Lord, it seems this creation is leaking! You have put too many burdens on her'
'She is not leaking...it is a tear' The Lord corrected the Angel…
'What's it for? ' Asked the Angel......
The Lord said. 'Tears are her way of expressing her grief, her doubts, her love, her loneliness, her suffering and her pride.'...
This made a big impression on the Angel,
'Lord, you are a genius. You thought of everything.
A woman is indeed marvellous'
Lord said.'Indeed she is.
She has strength that amazes a man.
She can handle trouble and carry heavy burdens.
She holds happiness, love and opinions.
She smiles when she feels like screaming.
She sings when she feels like crying, cries when happy and laughs when afraid.
She fights for what she believes in.
Her love is unconditional.
Her heart is broken when a next-of-kin or a friend dies but she finds strength to get on with life'
The Angel asked: So she is a perfect being?
The lord replied: No. She has just one drawback
'She often forgets what she is worth'.

Conversation On Woman..
Monday, June 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: woman
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I just came through this post on Facebook. And thought it necessary to share this with the world. All thanks to my Teacher Dorothy Momin for posting this, a wonderful definition of WOMAN.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Randhir Kaur 21 June 2016

Thank you Rahman Sir for your kind words.. Inspiring others is a very big thing..Feeling blessed. Soul in peace...

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Kelly Kurt 22 June 2016

I have four daughters and I would like them to read this. Thanks, Randhir

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Randhir Kaur 22 June 2016

Waoo I am so glad to hear that, May you and your family remain happy and blessed.. Thank you Kelly..I means a lot to me and my Teacher..

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Randhir Kaur 22 June 2016

I guess you did not went thru the poet's note.. Sunil this is a post I found on Facebook so I did not made any changes.. But I will certainly keep your words in my mind..will try so..thanks for reading...

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 June 2016

To shape her! With the muse of Beauty and Love. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 April 2017

I was mesmerized with the beauty of this lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 September 2016

Tears are her way of expressing her grief! ! Nice piece of work dedicated to women. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Randhir Kaur 05 July 2016

Thank you Khalid Sir for your analysis.. Peace on earth...

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Wonderfully communicated woman worth and her strength to come through all odds and difficulties and to come out as the best possible creation of God.Very well done Randhir Kaur. Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Randhir Kaur 29 June 2016

Thank you Rajnish Sir for your time..keep reading..

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