Conversation Poem by lady grace

Conversation

Rating: 4.4


And when the sun
talks to sky…saying
“Sky, will you please grant my wish? ”
send me the warmth of her love
for 3 hours
or maybe 2 hours
or even one...

sky says
“your wishes are granted sun”
you can have her
the longest hour you mentioned first…

and the lunar eclipse occur in the sky june 26/10…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 28 June 2010

A beautiful poem written in a cute fashion.

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Eyan Desir 28 June 2010

hey that very nice ..well express

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Zaynab Elzain 11 July 2010

lol what a conversation...gd poem, like it

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Pranab K Chakraborty 07 July 2010

Ho, such a romantic Idea brings the big to my nail-top! Beautiful.....Beautiful. Feel the sun like me also. You have done...what I can't express.....but done it. Cosmic world is no more alien from my inner world. A tie you have weaved by the words. I have not read before such a poem playing with so vast and living canvass where heavenly objects are like me and my surroundings. In truest sense you have personify the sun and sky like the lovers of our known society. Perfect synchronization of lunar eclipse. Give us more poet.....give us more...... Regards, 10++++++ Apoet Bangla

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 05 July 2010

'Celestial romance By terrestrial In note ethereal’ ~ niv Poet Lady Ma’am I’m eclipsed in your separate format of lolol… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Cosmic conversation...A wonderful little poem indeed! ; D

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Catrina Heart 01 July 2010

truly the eclipse saga have inspired you...great poem!

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