Continuity Poem by Min Sia

Continuity

Rating: 5.0


Ideas and thoughts were all premonitions.
Lingered together with emotion.
Sensitivity full of contradictions.
Losing its path in an intersection.

Followed by the alphabets.
Forming words on pens.
Each has its own definition.
Each has more than one notion.

Hesitations and confusions.
Rumbled through the inside dimension.
Not knowing the essence of this motion.
Thought of not surviving the evolution.

Deliverance of each potions.
Decision made by superb criterion.
To write was a form of communication.
To confirm or deny was an apprehension.

Earth's rotation, planet's revolution.
Existence into lifeworks into paperwork's version.
One into another means continuation.
But everything has its own completion.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 10 November 2008

One's completion of work, flowed with continuity...a10 Mia... Mabuhay! ! !

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 November 2008

wow! thoughtful and ya observation amazing....penned finely! ....10+

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

One into another means continuation. But everything has its own completion. Rachel Ann Butler

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 06 December 2008

Hello poet friend Min. This is an intriging read and thought provoking as well. I enjoyed, Loyd

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Blue Eyes 16 November 2008

i am really amazed by this poem.there are words that i cannot even spell.i had to use the dictionary to get the meanings of some words however, i loved the poem as soon as i understood it.i think ur english is great and ur poems r even better.

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Tj Becker 16 November 2008

Another excellent write. A style of your own, with flow and imagination

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Homen Thangjam 14 November 2008

Continuity shall define you as the poet to reckon with. A complete poem in terms of thought, ideas and integrity. Power of expression at its creative heights. Great.

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