Constant Motion Poem by Heather Burns

Constant Motion

Rating: 4.8


Another night in the
galaxy of space

swirling round and round
like a merry-go-round

will it ever stop
allow me to get off

I am spinning from the
constant mo

Saturday, December 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 07 December 2014

Since i am fan of Sir Issac Newton. So it came into my mind which i have also composed in my some poem. My hypothesis is every particle is in moving state and its velocity is inversely proportion to the mass of the body. Here through your poem it is clear we all are in constant motion. A nice poem related with physical science.Moreover poetry is the mother of all science/

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Salini Nair 09 December 2014

nice poem...like it..allow me to get off I am spinning from the constant mo

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Cadance Cunningham 13 December 2014

I always enjoy simple poems. the most is said with few words

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 10 December 2014

The world and its things and also the universe all are in motion a nice idea and scientific truth and poem is great.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2014

I am spinning from the constant motion makes its well realized and presented poem so far. Beautiful.

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Khairul Ahsan 03 July 2017

Loved the idea- our life is like a merry go round, we dono know when and where to stop and get down. Loved Soulful Heart's comment: 'every thing from an atom to a biggest galaxy is in motion...............swirling, twirling, bonding, pairing, cleaving.................universe is motion'.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 December 2015

Another night with the ways of life. Nice work.

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Soulful Heart 19 January 2015

every thing from an atom to a biggest galaxy is in motion...............swirling, twirling, bonding, pairing, cleaving.................universe is motion

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 January 2015

Beautiful poem Heather. Life is a merry go round, unsure of whether one will be able to get out of the thoughts itself, which keep us held in constant motion. This poem can be read in many ways. Loved reading it.

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 January 2015

Beautiful poem Heather. Life is a merry go round, unsure of whether one will be able to get out of the thoughts itself, which keep us held in constant motion. This poem can be read in many ways. Loved reading it.

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